I felt so scared was I going to make it ever? No, disappointment stuck me I felt soo stuck up, I had come........second I guess that was ok but I thought I could do that tiny bit better I bobbed up to the surface the swarming noise of the surface world stabbed me in the back, sheesh!!!!
You have used some really descriptive phrases in this text Jaya, well done.
ReplyDeleteWow Jaya I love the ending of your memory about your swimming race - you have really carefully selected interesting words that make your writing exciting to read.
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