Shared Writing by Room 1

We are currently learning how to write interesting recounts in Room 1. We have been doing some Shared Writing to help us practise our skills. We wrote a really interesting recount about the capture of the Easter Bunny and can't wait to carry it on ourselves tomorrow during Creative Writing time... What would you add if it was your story? 

Shared writing: 26.3.13

It spread all over the news… The Easter Bunny had been captured!

I was in my house, bawling my eyes out when I heard the horrible news. Bob, my little Easter pal, had been captured! Oh my word!

My little sister came running in. There were tears in her eyes and she was waving her fists.

“I’ll bet it’s the evil Dark Bunny” she screamed!!