Turn on the radio, what do you hear?
Hawks! Hawks! Give them a cheer!
Gotta beat them, bust them, that's our custom.
Goooooo Hawks!
I cheered for my team. Just then, I heard: Event 5! I nervously walked into the line.
I hopped in the pool. Suddenly I got a shock. I was so freezing I couldn't bare to move.
Bang! I tried my worst because I was so freezing. But I had come first! Oh, I should have chosen a whole length!!! I felt so embarrassed. It was super easy. Mr Fitness was calling out the points. We were winning by a ton of points! Grrrrrr! How I wished I had done a whole length.
What a lovely piece of writing JooHui. I can hear your personality very clearly through your work. You will know how to challenge yourself next year :) Mrs Prentice
ReplyDeletedid you enjoy doing swimming sports? what a lovely story joohui.
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