Wednesday, 10 April 2013
The Big Shadow By Georgia
"Jade, Jade, Jade" I try to shout but very quietly. "What's the matter?" She whispered, she made a big grumpy frown. I flicked my torch on it flickered and then went very bright, to bright though because a big shadow stood outside our tent.I felt I was being blinded by an eclipse and wanted to run right away from my tent.Jade almost screamed when she saw what I was talking about. I tried to snuggle down into my warm cosy sleeping bag but the other Jade had stolen my sleeping bag off me. I could hear all of the crickets chirping. I felt so scared, every time we talked all we could hear was ''ssshhhhh'' coming from the big shadow. I was shaking so hard I thought m heart would stop beating.The worst thing was that we didn't know who the shadow was.It could of been a stranger or any body, my dreams were scary for the rest of the night!
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Wow Georgia, this story really hooked me in!
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