"Oh my god" I said when I could see the abseiling wall, it was HUGE. After the lady told us how to do it Paul said "who would like to go last" I put my hand straight up I was shacking. I wanted to see how scary and how hard it was and each time I looked down the rock I would be nervous. Each time someone would come up I would say "was it scary or hard" they would always say " no it was simple' and I would say " it looked scary and hard". oh no now it is my turn as I take my first steep I can tell that it was scary and hard.
By Luke Kleuskens
Thats me
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have begun to include Show, not tell in your writing Luke. You're right - the abseiling wall was huge, but so worth it!
ReplyDeleteMrs Prentice